These lines are far more profound and pretty one can even imagine. Honestly speaking after a long time, I have read such a sweet, meaningful, and appealing poem😩♥️
Thank you so much, Tabasum! I am so glad you mentioned those two specific lines. With those lines I was trying to capture sentence structure and the vocabulary of an innocent young girl. Thank you for taking the time to analyze something so specific.
thank you so much, my friend. I appreciate your words more than you know. Especially since this comment was so long ago. I’m sorry, I haven’t been able to keep up with comments but I do care about your words. And, as I said, I value them, and you, so much.
I am lovely and pink
I’m now ready to link
These lines are far more profound and pretty one can even imagine. Honestly speaking after a long time, I have read such a sweet, meaningful, and appealing poem😩♥️
Thank you so much, Tabasum! I am so glad you mentioned those two specific lines. With those lines I was trying to capture sentence structure and the vocabulary of an innocent young girl. Thank you for taking the time to analyze something so specific.
this is so nicely written!!
Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Beautiful ✨️
Thank you, Mahira! I’m glad you liked it!
It would be appreciated if you give it a read:)
https://tabasum5.substack.com/p/let-me-be-buried?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android&r=76t5i3
Hi Mahira, I read the poem and left a comment! Thank you for sharing it with me. I really liked it!
This is delightfully lovely.
Thank you, Kelly! I truly appreciate it!
Hello Niraj, you’re most welcome. I love your poetry! Thank you so much for your support of mine.
I love your perspective on life and I love how you incorporate that in your poems.
Hello Niraj,
thank you so much, my friend. I appreciate your words more than you know. Especially since this comment was so long ago. I’m sorry, I haven’t been able to keep up with comments but I do care about your words. And, as I said, I value them, and you, so much.
I hope you emjoy a really beautiful day.
Thank you, Kelly! Hope you have a great day too!
Love the innocence in this poem.
Thank you! So glad that innocence came across!